The colours in this are hitting all the right buttons - lots of cool blues nestled right up to the warmest oranges and pinks and reds - lovely spectrum that you've managed to capture.
The open left, and the fenced right is fine, but I feel like balance is off. That's not to say it's the wrong choice, I just feel like there could be something considered with the weight of the wall, the tree, or the open gap to the left that should have been considered more.
And, I've scored Originality low - simply because you can browse through hundreds of similar (but not exact, of course) photographs of sunsets with lush green and cloudy skies. I don't see this photograph changing the face of photography, so my critique can only encompass the simple things like composition, colour, and light.
What a great time to photograph too - lovely feeling these saturated colours evoke.
It's strange... I don't like the picture so much that I would favorite it. Like... I wouldn't hang it on my wall for example. Of course, it is a great picture. It's just a matter of taste. However, when I look at it, I instantly wish to be there, walking or doing something else. So in the end I favorite many of your pictures, because they make me feel that way. It's kind of hard to explain, but I guess I explained it as best as I could lol
Oh and now when I typed it I realized... that is probably where the whole greatness in your pictures lies... the wish to be in them Basically, making you... um... feel something? lol Well, that is to me at least
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The open left, and the fenced right is fine, but I feel like balance is off. That's not to say it's the wrong choice, I just feel like there could be something considered with the weight of the wall, the tree, or the open gap to the left that should have been considered more.
And, I've scored Originality low - simply because you can browse through hundreds of similar (but not exact, of course) photographs of sunsets with lush green and cloudy skies. I don't see this photograph changing the face of photography, so my critique can only encompass the simple things like composition, colour, and light.
What a great time to photograph too - lovely feeling these saturated colours evoke.
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