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Personally I'd lower the view point a little. The horizon is a bit too low, and there's too many different things on the lower half of the image (grass, the meadow in the distant hill, the forest, and the horizon are all below the lower half) - which leaves the clouds a bit out of attention. You should probably have also moved a little more to the left to capture a bigger portion of the green grass and leave the wheat on the left side of the image out.
... sorry if that's rye or something else, you know what I'm talking about when I say wheat!
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